One day I was on a mysterious boat, called the Blackbird ship. It was going to china but some one wanted to stop me. So the next minute, I was shot at. I poo my pants and worst of all my cat phoo it smelt bad i died i had a baby but my baby died so there was no more from the family so everyone sellabrated the bomb was planeted right in the middle of the road and bbbbbbbbbbbbooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb????
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i liked the story but he coulld have of ended it a bit better thanhe did. i mean ity wasn't a very good ending. he could have also made it a bit if a longer story. and when he got to the end it was very weird.
ReplyDeletei liked the story. you had lots of interesting words, i also liked the ending and it was really cool. over all good job!
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